The focusing in and out really helped covey the feeling of movement even though there was no motion in the beginning. Well shot, plenty of light usage and colours
I really liked how you did the focus on the first few scenes. But I love the flower shot sooo much! But I feel this was more like a peaceful video than happiness.
I really like your music you used. My only suggestion would be to maybe have it a little more upbeat. I would also cut to the girl as she's drinking the coffee so you don't have such a long time with her looking depressed in a video that is trying to show happiness.
The use of nature and outdoor things like the fence and statue were good. But besides seeing the girl smile I didn't really see happiness. Maybe the girl enjoys a the sunrise in the morning but showing happiness could have been shown better.
It was definitely a nice touch that you used your own music! It made your video much more personal. You also did not have a whole lot going on which worked.
This is really well done. The beginning of the video made me feel serene and happy. The shots really displayed what you wanted to show. Towards the end when the woman was drinking out of a cup, wrapped in a blanket, that is exactly what one wants to feel to feel happy and serene. Awesome job.
Nicely done. I liked the still shots. I wish the edits would have been a bit quicker and there would have been more shots of the area surrounding her. The music was really nice with the video!
I liked the bright shots done in the sun with the abundance of color. Sunshine naturally brings light (no pun intended) to a situation when being filmed. I wish you would have done more video with people that would have had some facial expression towards the emotion. But the shooting is great
I really love your opening shot, the colors and focus are great, and it really sets the stage for "Happiness". The overall feeling is very peaceful, and your music is spot on (nice work!).
I liked the long tranquil shots and the music was very nice. I would have liked to have seen you mess with the color a little when the shot of the girl came in. It felt really cold/dressed. Just warm that scene up a little.
The focusing in and out really helped covey the feeling of movement even though there was no motion in the beginning. Well shot, plenty of light usage and colours
ReplyDeleteIt is very well done, but I got more of relaxation then happy.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you did the focus on the first few scenes. But I love the flower shot sooo much! But I feel this was more like a peaceful video than happiness.
ReplyDeleteI really like your music you used. My only suggestion would be to maybe have it a little more upbeat. I would also cut to the girl as she's drinking the coffee so you don't have such a long time with her looking depressed in a video that is trying to show happiness.
ReplyDeleteThe use of nature and outdoor things like the fence and statue were good. But besides seeing the girl smile I didn't really see happiness. Maybe the girl enjoys a the sunrise in the morning but showing happiness could have been shown better.
ReplyDeleteIt was definitely a nice touch that you used your own music! It made your video much more personal. You also did not have a whole lot going on which worked.
ReplyDeleteThis is really well done. The beginning of the video made me feel serene and happy. The shots really displayed what you wanted to show. Towards the end when the woman was drinking out of a cup, wrapped in a blanket, that is exactly what one wants to feel to feel happy and serene. Awesome job.
ReplyDeleteI feel that you took a little too long on each shot at the beginning before getting to the person.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. I liked the still shots. I wish the edits would have been a bit quicker and there would have been more shots of the area surrounding her. The music was really nice with the video!
ReplyDeleteI liked the bright shots done in the sun with the abundance of color. Sunshine naturally brings light (no pun intended) to a situation when being filmed. I wish you would have done more video with people that would have had some facial expression towards the emotion. But the shooting is great
ReplyDeleteI really love your opening shot, the colors and focus are great, and it really sets the stage for "Happiness". The overall feeling is very peaceful, and your music is spot on (nice work!).
ReplyDeleteNice video. I enjoyed the shot selections you chose, and the actress you used conveyed the emotion of happiness very well.
ReplyDeleteI loved your shots! They were pretty and super clear and did have a happy peaceful element to them. The music is really nice too!
ReplyDeleteI liked the long tranquil shots and the music was very nice. I would have liked to have seen you mess with the color a little when the shot of the girl came in. It felt really cold/dressed. Just warm that scene up a little.
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